Wednesday, July 25, 2007

Nakhra

Zabaan ki Dyodhi par machli hui wo baat,
chaukhat ke paar,
aangan par ruki,
mujhe mud kar dekha,
aur tunak kar boli,
"jaao, main tumse nahin bolungi!"

~
maanu

12 comments:

Manish said...

lines to acchi hain par lagta hai kuch ankaha reh gaya

us nazuk si baat ko tumse kya shikayat thi ....kyun hai ye nakhra uska...usse is bhav ko aage badhate to aur lutf aa sakta tha.

maverick said...

Nakhra isliye hai , kyonki wo Baby hai ... :)

Rustling_Leaves said...

Ussey mana lijiyega, kaheen waqai mein khafa hee na ho jaye...

A very tender and playful piece. Look forward to more.

maverick said...

hmmm, manaa to maine liya hai ... lekin yeh uski roz kii nautanki hai! :) I am glad you liked the lines.

bhavna said...

Maverick badi hi chunnida panktiyon ka collection hai aap. Itna pyaara collection hai aapke paas ki aapko likhe bagair nahi rah payi. Nazmen ghazlen aur khubsurat panktiyaan meri bhi kamzori hain ya yun kahen ki wo hi mere jine ka sahara hain. plz be in contact. my mail id is bhavnapathak05@gmail.com. take care aur yun hi likhte rahen

maverick said...

Bhavna,

humein khushi hui ki aapko humaaraa blog pasand aayaa. humaari khushkismati ki aap yahan aaye aur humne jo likha hai use padhne ke qaabil samjha.

maverick said...

@Bhavna

Shukriya!

Manjula said...

Nice blog. Keep up your poetic self!

Abhishek said...

Dizzy..very beautiful lines!

maverick said...

Thanks Manjula! I am glad you liked my blog and foudn it worthy of ur comment :)

maverick said...

Thanks Asty, .. these lines are by yours truly!

gomu said...

nice!!