Maverick badi hi chunnida panktiyon ka collection hai aap. Itna pyaara collection hai aapke paas ki aapko likhe bagair nahi rah payi. Nazmen ghazlen aur khubsurat panktiyaan meri bhi kamzori hain ya yun kahen ki wo hi mere jine ka sahara hain. plz be in contact. my mail id is bhavnapathak05@gmail.com. take care aur yun hi likhte rahen
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lines to acchi hain par lagta hai kuch ankaha reh gaya
us nazuk si baat ko tumse kya shikayat thi ....kyun hai ye nakhra uska...usse is bhav ko aage badhate to aur lutf aa sakta tha.
Nakhra isliye hai , kyonki wo Baby hai ... :)
Ussey mana lijiyega, kaheen waqai mein khafa hee na ho jaye...
A very tender and playful piece. Look forward to more.
hmmm, manaa to maine liya hai ... lekin yeh uski roz kii nautanki hai! :) I am glad you liked the lines.
Maverick badi hi chunnida panktiyon ka collection hai aap. Itna pyaara collection hai aapke paas ki aapko likhe bagair nahi rah payi. Nazmen ghazlen aur khubsurat panktiyaan meri bhi kamzori hain ya yun kahen ki wo hi mere jine ka sahara hain. plz be in contact. my mail id is bhavnapathak05@gmail.com. take care aur yun hi likhte rahen
Bhavna,
humein khushi hui ki aapko humaaraa blog pasand aayaa. humaari khushkismati ki aap yahan aaye aur humne jo likha hai use padhne ke qaabil samjha.
@Bhavna
Shukriya!
Nice blog. Keep up your poetic self!
Dizzy..very beautiful lines!
Thanks Manjula! I am glad you liked my blog and foudn it worthy of ur comment :)
Thanks Asty, .. these lines are by yours truly!
nice!!
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